Summer Feedback.

After my presentation my group gave me feedback about my work. They said my underlying theme of architecture works well and is a strong basis and concept to build upon. They also said my artist research is interesting and all the artists I looked at interlink with my theme. The blocked shapes I have been drawing can be easily developed into knit samples, and my muted monotone colour scheme with bursts of colours such as greens or gold works as a whole and will look interesting when developed into knit. The criticism I received such as to draw on a bigger scale and to add more bursts of colour into my drawing is very helpful, and has inspired me to do more drawings and use a varied media pallet such as more paints and pastels; this will increase my range and skill.